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The rising sun
Painting the sky with colors
Welcoming new day

Cerulean sky
Turning orange, red, and pink
Beautiful artwork




The Seasons



Buds come to life
Sweet aroma in the air
Birds are chirping

Trees shedding their leaves
Yellow leaves crunch below feet
Changing of seasons

White snowflakes falling
Icicles hanging from roof
Cold winter morning



Nature



Cocoon hangs from branch
Will soon emerge a butterfly
Beginning new life

Light summer showers
Brings out art work in the sky
Ribbons of color




Waterfall



White mists of beauty
Deafening sound of thunder
True force of nature
A series of haikus. (c) 2012 Thu Ya Win.

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:iconlostkudzu:
LostKudzu Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lovely!
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:icontyw7:
tyw7 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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LostKudzu Featured By Owner May 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome :)
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moyanII Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
you might like to check out some of the resources on haiku listed on the first page of #the-haiku-club.
haiku writing is not just about syllables' counting, so you don't have to excessively worry about that. :)
also, haiku do not have titles traditionally. it is essential to tell everything, obvious and implied, in just those few words.

anyway, for a starter you might like to read this article to know the original form and intention of haiku:
[link]
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tyw7 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The reason for the title is to seperate one haiku from another.
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moyanII Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The separation should be clear even without titles.
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tyw7 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
So I should just remove the titles?
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moyanII Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yes. Perhaps with a little regrouping of the haiku, sunrise-sunset, spring-autumn-winter, waterfall-butterfly. Then the link should be clear enough without indication.
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tyw7 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
How's the new grouping?
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moyanII Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
the last three could probably be grouped under 'garden' or something like that.
although, there is a slight problem that the waterfall verse is a little unclear without the title. a haiku should be clear without a title.
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